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Two Poems, with Figurative Language
Says Mr. Dennis Siluk, when asked to review his poetry somewhat, for he hesitates all the time when I ask him to so; I can tell you. Anyhow, he said to me (responding more on poem #728, "Derivative Echoes"): "Figurative language, meaning words used to refer to something that you don't really mean, is used here to make noises, as are metaphors sometimes. Probably the reason I used figurative language imagery here was to tie the ideas and feelings my poem [s] expresses [ness] to the physical world in which I want it to exist." He lost me somewhere along the line, but it sounded good when I read the poems. Rosa Penaloza. The Bear-men of Qolqepunku (Foreshadow) High up in the Andes of Peru Glacier, frost and snow Dressed in furry clocks and masks Of sacred healing powers The Bear-men, they are called: Guardians of the ice They cut the ice in solid blocks To family, friends, and livestock Ah! Sixteen-thousand feet high, comes Year, after year, after year. The Bear-men-, silently watch As if in thin air!... They've now decide to leave the ice As warming temperatures rise? This is helping the Ice Cap Perhaps this is a whisper? "Is this the world's end?" #731 6/17/05 Derivative Echoes I would show you love in a handful of clouds- Could I find the clouds, and find the love; Fallen angels had love from heaven, In hell one loves lust and thus, would be Unhappy in Heaven I imagine?; Looking for?? We're living for? ?with aches and pains in the mind Fear of death-nymphs (well dressed) Light; perfect pitch, more questions than #728 6/2005 Poet Dennis Siluk
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